Monday, November 14, 2011

Writing from the Other Side

Obama has made significant changes in the human rights category as well. He strongly encourages gay rights after he refused anyone interested in the Commander in Chief position that did not support the “don’t ask, don’t tell” policy. This policy makes it possible for homosexuals to enter the United States army freely without discrimination. Obama is also pro-choice in regards to the ongoing and controversial issue of abortion, believing it is a woman’s choice what she does with her body. Along with that, he also rid former President Bush’s policy on interrogation of suspected terrorists. Obama has also entered the United States in the United Nations Human Rights Council, a council that promotes the strengthening of human rights across the globe. In a report given to the council, Obama has suggested the federal government hire more that are disabled and has also given women the right to sue their employers if they are paid less than their male co-workers under the .  
                With all this said, one can see that Obama has made efforts in the face of human rights. He has certainly attempted to better our society, not only in America, but all throughout the world. Along with this, he also bans those who are part of war crimes and in violations of serious human rights from entering out country in order to protect the American people. To protect others outside of the United States, Obama sent troops to intervene in Libya’s fight for human rights, saying it was a necessary act in order to protect thousands of innocent civilians. His acts for human rights increase the safety and security of people of all races and all nationalities, hopefully making advancements towards a world peace.
                

1 comment:

  1. This response needs a framework (including an introduction and conclusion). The first sentence sounds as if it is missing a sentence before it (it ends in "as well." As well as what?). Was this taken from somewhere else?

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